Very easy to do and it exploits the concepts of catty chicks being vindictive to one another and all that stuff that is politically uncorrect but still such fun to watch. Yours for the asking if you want to make it.





IT’S JUST BUISINESS:

Synopsis



Fifth year senior (for the third straight year), college cute-girl, BRIDGET, a party-babe and fashion-femme-to-the-max--finally gets the money shut off from a thoroughly disgusted and cash-starved Mom and Dad. A DELIVERY MAN, dropping off Bridget’s latest pair of Brunomagli designer shoes, overhears the distraught conversation.



Desperate to maintain her carefree, frivolous, live-for-the-moment lifestyle, she agrees to a one-time partnership with the seedy Delivery Guy who supplements his income sidelining as a white slaver. BRIDGET lures an innocent, unsuspecting fellow coed HEATHER, into a trap. It turns out the newly acquired captive is a psychology major. While waiting to be hauled off to an unknown fate, Heather just about drives Bridget crazy with her own obsessive/compulsive, personalized psycho analysis of Bridget. The coed’s pesky ramblings are finally silenced with one of Bridget’s slouch socks.



The Delivery Man finally comes to pick up and pay off on the deal but things go south when Bridget learns that the captive is destined NOT for sexual slavery in some overseas brothel or a rich Shiek’s harem. It seems poor Heather is destined to get cut up for body parts in the illegal, underground, body organ transplant trade run by the Russian Mafia. Yikes! No, make that double YIKES!



Bridget second thought about her deal. She is turned-off by the ultra sordid scheme and tries to renege on her deal and give back the money for Heather’s freedom. Bridget quickly learns that all sales are final in the deviously decadent world of white slave trade. When Bridget protests, she pays the ultimate price herself. Both Bridget and Heather learn the hard way that it’s not personal—IT’S JUST BUISINESS.





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Again, this involves a very basic setting (i.e., an apartment and one quick exterior shot).



The characters are easily related to in that we all know a air-headed, “live-for-today” party girl type we’d love to see taken down a notch or two—maybe three.



This story admittedly exploits and mocks the female shoe fetish and also involves a sarcastic mockery of female psychology and, psychology in general. Plus, I like to think it’s just a fun little noir style story where the good girl doesn’t win in the end or get rescued.



Tori

tori wrote:

The Delivery Man finally comes to pick up and pay off on the deal but things go south when Bridget learns that the captive is destined NOT for sexual slavery in some overseas brothel or a rich Shiek’s harem. It seems poor Heather is destined to get cut up for body parts in the illegal, underground, body organ transplant trade run by the Russian Mafia. Yikes! No, make that double YIKES!

So selling her into slavery's ok, but having her killed crosses the line? Does that hold up to you?

tori wrote:

Very easy to do and it exploits the concepts of catty chicks being vindictive to one another and all that stuff that is politically uncorrect but still such fun to watch. Yours for the asking if you want to make it.



Tori

Why don't you make it?



I think it would be a mistake for a guy to produce this, I think there might be too many questions a guy couldn't answer about this story.



If you'd be willing to send the script to me (not now) I could ask some of the female film makers in my network if they'd be interested.



Lee

Hey if I understood the summary <myspace><myspace>right</myspace></myspace&g t;, it sounds pretty cool, I have a really kickass idea for the DVD cover if someone ever made this film. Let me know if my input is wanted.

That's about it, in a nutshell. Hence the dark humor madness of such a nefarious ploy.

I reckon that could actually appeal to a lot of people. I mean, of course some people may be a bit disgusted with the <myspace><myspace>top</myspace></myspace> ics, but if it turns out well it'd be something I'd be interested to watch.



As long as you take care when scripting the psychological analysis.

Would love to know your general idea for a DVD cover.



Tori

It is, after all, a dark humored horror/thriller so people shouldn't be too disgusted with anything if that is what they are looking for. If they don't like horror/thriller, they shouldn't be bothered with the subject material in the first place. Know what I mean?

tori wrote:

Would love to know your general idea for a DVD cover.



Tori

If I understood <myspace><myspace>right</myspace></myspace&g t;, the story has something to do with somebody selling body parts to like the black market, and its about a girl who is all fancy or whatever, <myspace><myspace>right</myspace></myspace&g t;.



Well I say you have a picture of a girls leg in a high heel, but thats it just the leg( from knee cap down), and it has some of the bone sticking out of the <myspace><myspace>top</myspace></myspace> of it, and blood is running down the leg onto the shoe.



I drew a pic, but not real sure how i could show you it lol.



Hope you liked the idea,

Newkmann Productions

Thanx Newkkman:



I like your idea overall as a graphic for a horror film. Nice touch, really.



With that said, I realize that without reading the script you don't know the true nature of the story. Rather than a basic gore based horror film, it's actually a sarcastic, dark-humored piece that pokes fun at the shallow nature of a bratty, spoiled, college girl who has her parent's money shut off. She is desparate for cash and crosses paths with a seedy, delivery guy who convinces her to try her hand at a little white slavery and kidnap on another coed, deliver the captive to him and he'll give her some quick cash so she can maintain her good-time-girl, party lifestyle. She does so, and gets the cash. It comes out in the conversation that the captive isn't going to some brothel for the sex slave trade but is most likely scheduled to be cut up for body parts in the underground illegal organ transplant business. Well, even spoiled brat college girls have thier moral limits. It seems selling another chick as a sex slave is one thing, but cutting her up is just not <myspace><myspace>right</myspace></myspace&g t;. (sarcastic humor intended !!!!!)



She tries to back out on the deal and discovers that all sales are final. She ends up in the slavers hands herself. It's not personal, IT'S JUST BUSINESS.



So, there really isn't any depiction of blood or gore. Hope that helps a bit.



I think a lot of people don't catch the fact that this is meant to be a sarcastic thriller that pokes fun at shallow, phoney, live-for-today party girl types.